Error Analysis

Part 2 : Error Analysis
1. The little girl spoke so quiet that I could hardly hear her.
             A                           B                   C                       D
The little girl spoke so quiet that I could hardly hear her. (adjective – adverb form)
. . . so quietly that . . .

2. Each driver shoulcheck the oil level in their car every three months.
                           A          B                               C            D
Each driver should check the oil level in their car every three months. (pronoun-antecedent agreement) 
S= dianggap tunggal
. . . in his or her car . . .

3. I hated to ask Anita, whom is a very stingy person to lend me money.
           A                             B                      C                      D
I hated to ask Anita who is a very stingy person to lend me money. (commas nonessential interrupter)                                          kikir
. . . Anita , who is a very stingy person , to . . .

4. She decided to quit her high-pressured job, she didn’t want to develop heart trouble.
                 A                                                     B                   C                             D     
 She decided to quit her high-pressured job, she didn’t want to develop heart trouble
.(comma splice) sambungan
. . . job ; she . . . / . . . job , for she. . . / . . . job . She . . .
                                       
5. The flakes in this cereal tastes like sawdust.
             A       B                      C     D
The flakes in this cereal tastes like sawdust. Serbuk gergaji (subject-verb agreement)
. . . flakes (in this cereal) taste.. .  S=jamak

6. Much of my boyhood was devoted to getting into rock fights, crossing railway trestles, and the hunt
                        A                         B                         C                                                                           D
for rats in drainage tunnels.
Much of my boyhood was devoted to getting into rock fights, crossing railway trestles, and the hunt for rats                                      
                                      mencurahkan                                             
in drainage tunnels.(parallelism) . . . and hunting for . . .

7. When Turning on the ignition, the car backfired.
                      A     B              C                       D      
When Turning on the ignition, the car backfired. (dangling modifier) 
                            Pembakaran
When I turned on the ignition, the car backfired.
Turning on the ignition, I made the car backfire.

8. I asked the clerk if the store had Stevie Wonders latest CD.
           A                  B                 C                   D
I asked the clerk if the store had Stevie Wonders latest CD. (apostrophe)
                                                               Wonder’s

9. The decisions of the judge seemquestionable.
                            A          B        C             D
The decisions of the judge seems questionable. (subject-verb agreement)  S = jamak
. . . decisions (of the judge) seem . . .

10. Earlier in the day, she took a taxi to the airport. Knowing that her time waslimited.
           A                               B                                 C                                       D
Earlier in the day, she took a taxi to the airport. Knowing that her time was limited. (fragment)
Earlier in the day, she took a taxi to the airport, knowing . . .

11. Anybody who wants more dessert should give their order to the pastry chef.
                         A                B                                      C      D
Anybody who wants more dessert should give their order to the pastry chef.(pro.-antecedent agreement) 
S= dianggap tunggal
. . . give his or her order . . .

12. You must observe all the rules of the game, even if you do not always agree with it.
              A            B                                                  C                                                     D
You must observe all the rules of the game, even if you do not always agree with it. (pronoun reference)
. . . with them. Them refers to : Rules of the game

13. Playing tag on the back lawn, I spotted first the turtle
            A            B                                 C       D
Playing tag on the back lawn, I spotted first the turtle. (misplaced modifier)
Playing tag on the back lawn, I first . . .

14. Because he never fully realized how important a college education could be.
            A              B                  C                                                   D
Because he never fully realized how important a college education could be.(fragment)
He never fully realized . . .
Because . . . . could be, he enlisted in the army.

15. Her and I have been good friends now for many years.
                A           B                     C              D

Her and I have been good friends now for many years. (pronoun case) She and I . . .

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